When I think about you, it's like I can't breathe.

[shadowgirl1605]

Title: Starting Point
For: someone over y!gal
Pairings/Characters: Byakuya/Renji
Word Count: 909
Summary: Sometimes, the best thing to do is to be honest. With yourself and with others. Sometimes, people can surprise you.
Author Notes: Soooo, this was my first try at Byakuya/Renji and I wasn’t sure where to even begin. Ah well, I hope it’s semi-

Comments

[nnoi]

OMG I LOVED THIS!

It was so great you are made of WINZ!!!

*bows down*

I loved Renji just giving up on sublty and that YOU ME BACK CLOSET and Bya saying When? LOL OMG
*runs off with a nose bleed*

[shadowgirl1605]

XD lmao! Yes, Renji doesn't much appreciate subtly ;D *hug* Thanks for commenting~

[nnoi]

Ok i see I was first comment soooo...let me pick a prompt....lorryl wrote:

lorryl
Theme/Prompt: First kiss
Anime or Manga: Bleach
Character(s): Ukitake/Yoruichi

[shadowgirl1605]

Will do ;)

[yawns_widely]

I'm going to bow down too. *bows much lower than calmingeffects*

Your writing astounds me with its depth, maturity and thought out planning; with the history and internal dialogue.

I feel inadequate. I have to admit that Byakuya x Renji pairings have never really grabbed me but it has now. Thanks to you!

I think I am going to have to take more time, and more care over my own stories now.

[shadowgirl1605]

*blushes* Wow, what a nice comment to find in my inbox. But you are not inadequate. Your stories are lovely, too!

I have to admit, I had a hard to time writing this since I always struggle with Byakuya ;_; I just ... can't seem to write him as well as I want to. Hence why I went with Renji's side of the story with this. ^^;

Again, thank you :) *have a hug?*

[yawns_widely]

You did a wonderful job and the inadequate part is more of a compliment to your talents than self deprecation on my part.

*roz hugs shadowgirl*

[shadowgirl1605]

Good, good ^^; I have a friend who always puts her self down, though, so I always assume likewise with other people instinctively. Self-deprecation is evil! D<

:) *glomp/tackle/hug!*

[annieroo2]

So for my first time back to the internet in what seems like weeks, and I find this little gem!

I loved your introspective Renji. The first 'date' was probably fairly accurate too! :D Although I'm not sure I can see Byakuya actually agreeing to closet sex. Still loved the thought of it! Maybe he'll just tie Renji up though and leave him for awhile for daring to ask so rudely. LOL

[shadowgirl1605]

Welcome back! *hug!*

:) Thank you~ And yeah, I can see the whole tying up as punishment thing more so than the closest sex as well ;D

>.> I had no idea where to start with Bya/Ren. I lean more towards Ren/Ichi or Ren/Uryuu myself.

[annieroo2]

I am such a fic whore. I'll read just about any pairing when i have the time.

When I'm pressed for time Isshin fics are first because there are so few, followed by RenIchi, RenIshi, IchiIshi, ShuuRen, ByaRen, IkkaYumi, ShunUki, UraIchi, ByaRenIchi, RukiRenIchi, ShuuRenIchi... XD

I could go on like forever. Renji's my main man-whore though. Put him with anyone and I'll read it. :D

[shadowgirl1605]

XD Haven't read too many ShuuRenIchi ones, but that sounds interesting ... Haha, Renji is such a man-whore ;D He goes well with just about everyone.

[snailrevolution]

Yay! I love Byakuya's weird sense of humor. ^_^

I like how it went from introspective to cute, but not abruptly. Very nice. :D

[shadowgirl1605]

XD

Thank you~! I'm glad it came off all right ^^; I was afraid the pace was too quick, myself, but that cheers me up to hear it wasn't :D Thank you again *hug*

Work still killin' ya? :(

[snailrevolution]

Nah. Maybe if you were going for a longer story, but this is a well-paced drabble. ^^

nah, not so much. just that one day. XD

[shadowgirl1605]

:) Thanks.

Good to hear! And lol, still jealous about Rachel getting to see that Prince of Tennis musical? ;) *is also a little envious there* *finally got around to reading PoT!*