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5. MISCOMMUNICATION (PG) BY IAMSHADOW

Oct 25, 2007 03:04

Title: Miscommunication
Author: iamshadow
Ship: Ron/Harry
Word Count: 871
Rating: PG
Warnings: BIG Fight! Oh Noes!
Summary: Ron behaving badly.
A/N: Just one big, dialogue heavy scene this time. Mid October.

The Teapot 'verse Series
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( Miscommunication )

angst, pg, ron/harry

Comments 42

hpuckle October 24 2007, 17:43:03 UTC

Wow, I love angst. I love intensity of this scene and love how they are looking at each other like they hate each other... only because we know the truth! lol

Another excellent installment.

xxx

iamshadow October 24 2007, 18:06:28 UTC

I think at this moment, they do hate each other, and more than a little bit, too.

Harry can't stand the way Ron's been lashing out at the people around him. Hurting George by walking out is the last in a long line of bad behaviours I'd imagine have been going on for weeks.

Ron is frustrated and furious at Harry for making him feel the way he does. I don't think he's disgusted by it, or anything like that. It's just something Ron doesn't need right now and doesn't know how to deal with. He's just starting to live as an adult. He's helping to run a business, getting chewed out by mail by his girlfriend who's hundreds of miles away, and he's still grieving for his brother. Plus, the person he's been fantasising about, masturbating thinking of and probably dreaming about isn't just nearby, he's in the same room. Right there, two steps and he's close enough to touch. Sleeping right beside him ( ... )

auntbijou October 24 2007, 17:46:24 UTC

Wow... what a cliffy!! *stunned* I am so totally hooked now. And all for a teapot!! *laughs*

iamshadow October 24 2007, 18:07:24 UTC

Tea began it, but it's certainly becoming a lot more than that!

hpaa October 24 2007, 17:46:29 UTC

Oh Good Lord, I am going to have to take a minute to calm down after reading this...
AND I cannot wait for the next part....!!

iamshadow October 24 2007, 18:07:54 UTC

Either can I! As always, I have no idea what it'll be!

massielita October 24 2007, 17:48:22 UTC

Oh my! So much angst, I love it! That kiss left *me* light headed. I love reading your stuff :D

iamshadow October 24 2007, 18:09:08 UTC

It's certainly given Harry a lot to think about.

Once the shock wears off and he starts thinking again at all, of course.

ms_worplesdon October 24 2007, 18:20:17 UTC

His lips are hard and wet and soft against mine and his body is hot and my arms where he’s holding me hurt and there’s a sort of thrumming ache deep in my chest and he’s shoving me away…

!!! Never say that Ron's not a Gryffindor. Wow.

I am getting spoiled. A Remus/Sirius and a Harry/Ron by you in one afternoon? I'm gagging for more.

shadowfiction October 24 2007, 18:27:12 UTC

Anger and months worth of sexual frustration will do wonders for your courage. Plus, I imagine Harry all flushed and panting and eyes flashing from a fight would be pretty hard for him to resist right at that moment when Harry's challenging him about what the issue is.

And having Ron kiss him meant I didn't have to write any awkward "er, I fancy you" dialogue! *dances* *is smart*

Gagging in a good way, I hope!

Of Wolf and Man is probably going to be a weekly thing. That'll give me plenty of time to get my groove on and get back into writing it. I've been kinda stuck for over a week on a certain scene.