TOGETHER (PG-13) BY IAMSHADOW

Nov 24, 2007 19:35

Title: Together
Author: iamshadowShip: Remus/Sirius ( Read more... )

drabble, remus/sirius, angst, pg13

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tailoredshirt November 24 2007, 08:51:40 UTC
*flails*

You left me.

I always felt like Remus would have a lot of anger after Sirius died. How it would manifest itself is a different question, but I really like angry!Remus for a fic like this. It feels real, after everything he's been through.

*sigh* Love it.

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shadowfiction November 24 2007, 09:05:53 UTC
The thing that got me thinking was that Remus was having to hold Harry back from running, which was probably giving him some control over his reactions.

What if someone else was holding Harry? What if he was standing alone while contemplating his future life? What if the vague knowledge that Harry was nearby just wasn't enough?

If I was Remus I would be pissed, and just so tired of being the one left behind. To get Sirius back, whether as a friend or a lover, for such a short space of time only to lose him...it's just so cruel.

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kath_ballantyne November 24 2007, 09:51:55 UTC
*wails*
I hope they're together now.
*flails*
Poor Remus. Poor Harry now too.

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shadowfiction November 24 2007, 09:55:02 UTC
I hope so...but it's kind of fade to grey after that moment, so I'm not sure.

*flails over your new icon*

Love it!

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forest_rose November 24 2007, 11:28:44 UTC
"I'll never leave you again, Moony," you whispered, as you kissed my hair.

You lied.

Ohhhh. This just kills me.

Beautifully written.

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shadowfiction November 24 2007, 11:47:59 UTC
That was my favourite bit, too. The fragile beautiful moment of connecting, contrasted with the utter, bitter resentment at being left alone.

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noscrubs12345 November 24 2007, 12:36:44 UTC
Oh, it's absolutely beautiful!

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shadowfiction November 24 2007, 13:46:33 UTC
Thank you! Remus is an angst writer's dream, really.

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ms_worplesdon November 24 2007, 13:47:32 UTC
NOOOOO!

I'm so glad this didn't really happen.

*sniff*

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shadowfiction November 24 2007, 14:07:50 UTC
Look on the bright side! In this AU Lupin *totally* snuffed Lucius Malfoy. How cool is that?

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