Comments | shadowbyrd: Where we're going there won't be postcards... [fic]

shadowbyrd

Where we're going there won't be postcards... [fic]

Nov 22, 2009 01:36

Title: Where we're going there won't be postcards...
Author: shadowbyrd
Rating: PG-13
Prompt: Challenge 24 at jantolution
Word Count: 6612
Pairing(s): Jack/Ianto
Summary: "No man needs a vacation so much as the man who has just had one." (writer Elbert Hubbard)
A/N: Takes place in an everybody lives! AU (i.e. Toshiko is still alive and kicking, Owen's still kicking), ( Read more... )

jantolution, torchwood fic, jack/ianto, fic, torchwood

Comments 16

mtgat November 22 2009, 02:48:10 UTC

PIRATES!!!

Loved this!

shadowbyrd December 3 2009, 12:48:42 UTC

Everything's better with pirates!

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jcad6169 November 22 2009, 03:53:03 UTC

This is great! A good read and very good visualizations. Thanks for sharing it with us.

shadowbyrd December 3 2009, 12:51:02 UTC

Thank you! I try to have strong imagery in my writing and it's good to know that I succeeded here.

Thanks for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

hab318princess November 22 2009, 08:50:04 UTC

loved that (Eastenders just made me giggle, so did the pirates) and loved the backstory with the Daleks

great story

shadowbyrd December 3 2009, 12:53:28 UTC

Glad you enjoyed it! And that Eastenders made you laugh - I felt a little silly putting that in.

abby_juniper November 22 2009, 09:07:54 UTC

Oh, I LOVED this. A really nice read, and you got their voices spot-on!

shadowbyrd December 3 2009, 12:55:05 UTC

Thank you! Glad you liked it!

truenorth7 November 22 2009, 11:04:17 UTC

This was great! I so enjoyed your imagery in this well done!

shadowbyrd December 3 2009, 12:56:27 UTC

Thank you! I adore writing with strong imagery, though it's something I'm still trying to emulate in my own writing. Good to know it worked this time.