You do realize, don’t you, that I had to read every paragraph twice because I was so desperate to see what was going to happen that my eyes couldn't help but flurry across the screen and then I would have to read it again to get the details?
Ooh, I do that all the time when a fic really excites me and makes me feel something. That's a huge compliment.
I loved when Ian was 'angry' at Michael for telling Aaron about the previous night and then proceeeded to undress him as he berated him.
Thank you. That part, I think, was very integral to the story, because I think it was when I wrote that part that I really realized how manipulative this Ian was. I mean, I knew it all along in my head, but he really became 'real' to me then.
There's so much more I want to compliment you on, but I fear I've already hijacked too much space on your LJ.
I'm sure Cat doesn't mind endless praise, and neither do I. :) I know I love long comments that are specific. It's so very beneficial to the writing process. And again, thank you for being so thorough and boosting my ego some. :)
Ooh, I do that all the time when a fic really excites me and makes me feel something. That's a huge compliment.
I loved when Ian was 'angry' at Michael for telling Aaron about the previous night and then proceeeded to undress him as he berated him.
Thank you. That part, I think, was very integral to the story, because I think it was when I wrote that part that I really realized how manipulative this Ian was. I mean, I knew it all along in my head, but he really became 'real' to me then.
There's so much more I want to compliment you on, but I fear I've already hijacked too much space on your LJ.
I'm sure Cat doesn't mind endless praise, and neither do I. :) I know I love long comments that are specific. It's so very beneficial to the writing process. And again, thank you for being so thorough and boosting my ego some. :)
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