Nihon: Twofold (1)

[shadow_of_egypt]

Title: Twofold
Characters/Pairings: KuroFai, others mentioned, OCs
Rating: M - warnings (and I do so hate giving warnings) for violence, possible (probable) OC death, bad language, and definite citrus content. Possibly (probably) other dark stuff too. *absently tacks that last bit on, just in case*
Summary: To the neighbouring nation of Chugoku

Comments

[demi_rabbit]

-has an epic spazz-out moment- It was like...there was SEX. And then there was a BATH! And then there were MINI FAI'S!! -shot-

That was...supercalifragalisticexpialadosious on a whole 'nother level! I...I... I love you. xDD I can't wait for more, as always. Assuming there is more...But, seriously, I think I discovered a new part of my mind and broke it by the amazingness of this fic! ^^ Many, many kudos~

[shadow_of_egypt]

...I like how you hit on all the important parts, there. *deeply amused* And - um..I'm glad the sex stuff was ok? *sheepishly admits it's her first time writing it*

And yeaaah, there's more to this fic - it's a story, instead of a oneshot. (Not a very long one though, I hope). Not to self: You will keep this short, Shacha.

*gives you a dustpan and brush for your brain* x~

[demi_rabbit]

I know, right. I am incredibly observant x3 And the sex was pretty awesome - it's always funky to write the first time, but people can hardly ever tell ^^ I think you did fantastically!

-proceeds to clean brain and glue it back together-

[amythest_n_ice]

So brilliant! Are they going to abduct Fai's mini-me's?

[shadow_of_egypt]

What they do with the mini-mes is 'top seekrit' right now. *has been hiding this plot from everyone, yup* ^.~

[taigrin]

OMG, this was gorgeous! I want more! The story is interesting and the way you describe what's happening is great too. And omg the scene on the corridor <3

[shadow_of_egypt]

I'm very glad you enjoyed it then, thanks. ^^ (Kuro-chan and Fai levels of decency seem to plummet when they're together. It's a pity Mokona isn't around anymore, or she'd have some interesting photographs to snap for an otherworldly Yuuko.)

[taigrin]

Mokona is the greatest fangirl's ally ;P

[shadow_of_egypt]

And Tomoyo gives us the clothes to make the bishies cosplay~

[keleosnoonna]

Loved this first part!
You did a great job with the dialog, it's very funny and really well written. The smut part was HOT!
And hskjfgdshfd THAT LAST SCENE! Can't wait for more

[shadow_of_egypt]

I'll get to writing the next part, then. ^^ *skips away somewhat pleased she surprised people, mmhm~*

[smoochy_ryoko]

That was awesome. And the twins....oooo, the twins!!!

[smoochy_ryoko]

Oh an after reading your question about the smex scenes, let me tell you I am super surprised that was your first smutty scene. It didn't go to any of the usual cliches and had great attention to detail. I am really impressed. Also I have to tell you this is the best new story I have read in a while! I am DYING to know what happens next.

[shadow_of_egypt]

I've been reading smut for a while, but writing it still feels like a whole new ball game, to use a cliché. Maybe the reading helps? And...I didn't suddenly want to go into great, in-depth porn as that might've wrecked the flow of the chapter somewhat (and writing it would've killed me /////)so... *helpless shrug* I'm glad it was ok.
...I hope I don't disappoint when I write/put-up the next part?