Fic: This Cold Country (2)

[shadow_of_egypt]

Title: This Cold Country   
Rating: T
A/N: For the 

Comments

[amythest_n_ice]

WAAAHHH!!! That's so sad :( Beautifully written but soooo sad.

[shadow_of_egypt]

*sheepishly offers a tissue*

[youkohiei_fan]

;~;

Wonderful fic, loved the interactions and just the history behind the story. <3

[shadow_of_egypt]

Thank you-! *gives tissues as well*

[demi_rabbit]

Ahhhhhh! That was...that so so incrediably pretty! And well written! I...I think I ned to go cry now - it was that good!!

One thing that...put me off was...The scene where Fai confronts Kurogane...

//“Of course not,” Yuui agrees, and goes back to his paper.

Feeling chastised, Kurogane bends down to pick up his book again to pretend to read a little more. The room descends back into quiet.//

Shouldn't that say Fai - not Yuui? *hides in case she's wrong*

But, seriously, that was lovely!! The ending was simply perfecting, and the affection and events before the birthday party were so well constructed! I...I love this!! <3 Many, many kudos!

[shadow_of_egypt]

Ah, I missed one-! *actually had a lot of trouble keeping Fai and Yuui straight whilst writing* EA's got my brain wired wrong. >.< *shakes fist at it*

And I'm glad you enjoyed it, and please have some of my tissues. *hands 'em over* ^^;;

[xxray]

Agagagagagagagah.
My brain is a mess, thanks to your awesomeness. This was in all ways perfect, the plot, the characterization, the language... I especially loved the ending, the way you kind of left it open was just... It was sad but still very satisfying.

And here I thought I couldn't love your writing more than I already did.

[shadow_of_egypt]

*produces brain-dustpan-and-brush for your usage and presents with a bow* For the mess I made. ^^;

May I friend you? I'm still in awe of your art, tho' I sometimes have trouble keeping track of it/you.

[xxray]

*tidies up what's left oft brain*

Of course you may! <3 And I guess I can friend you back? :3

[shadow_of_egypt]

*happy burbles and nods*

[mikkeneko]

That was a beautiful fic -- thanks for writing it. So sad.

[shadow_of_egypt]

And thank you for reading~