Fic: Ever After (6)

[shadow_of_egypt]

Title: Ever After

Characters/Pairings: KuroFai, AshFai, SyaoSaku and DoumWataHima(ish?) Basically, anything implied (or outright stated in recent chapters of the manga with some pairings) in CLAMP canon that my mind stumbles across.
Rating: T

Summary: ‘Fairytale’ is a very trying place. Children get abandoned; loves fall under evil spells, and

Comments

[archangelunmei]

Waaah, I loves you! <3 Watanuki as Little Red Riding Hood made me giggle like mad.

Also, as usual, I LOVE the KuroFai interactions this chapter, especially Kurogane flipping out over Fai smelling like another man. I can't wait to see the confrontation that'll result from that! ♥♥♥

[shadow_of_egypt]

Ahhh~! You caught the reference!! X3 (Not that I didn't explicitly nick words from the original fairytale, but shhhh.)

...You have three guesses as to who Fai slept with, and the first two don't count at all. ^^ Poor Kurogane, expecting human morality from someone just a little screwed up in the head.

[archangelunmei]

Well obviously Fai slept with Chii, because y'know, Clamp's wrong, Fai's totally straight.

Also! Feel free to add me on MSN, tis the same as my email addy. |D I just warn you, I'm a bit dead tonight.

[shadow_of_egypt]

*snerk* Chii turns into a man now?

*hunts down this addy*

[crys_tenkari]

Oh goodness! So many serious things going on this time. Fai's return felt especially intense - poor Kurogane, taking a proverbial slap like that.

(Psst, the cutting is forgiven, Doumeki is a difficult bastard.)

[shadow_of_egypt]

Kurogane has a right to be offended - but then, I also kinda think Fai has the right to go sleep with whoever he wants. Neither of them really entered the engagement with any intent on making it a real one, but - *shrugs* Awkward issues.

There's more from the Doumeki family next chapter now - and the swimming!Fai I promised. ^^;;

Thanks for pointing out the weird font again.

[crys_tenkari]

Well, of course to both, but Kuro-wolf really can't help that possessive canine streak at the moment, now can he?

YAY FAI FANSERVICE~!

And no problem, glad to help.

Psst, do the Mokonas get a fairytale?

[shadow_of_egypt]

Fai's marked territory, ne? >3

I don't think they do... They fit into the other tales though?

[shadow_of_egypt]

A darling for others, perhaps. He's so alien to my mindest, I think, and others around me. *doesn't know anyone with his sort of patience in the face of Watapon* Let's give it a few chapters though, it should hopefully become easier with practice, hm?

Re: Feel free to ignore. Just a discussion on characterisation.

[shadow_of_egypt]

...He does seem fundamentally a do-it-yourself kind of guy - it's the reason he couldn't enter Yuuko's shop for such a long time; he granted his own wishes.
Doumeki seems...very critical in a quiet way. He gives everything its chance, and then silently continues with or abandons things as they are depending on whether they meet his..'standards', I suppose. *ponders*

[youkohiei_fan]

Another wonderful chapter ^-^ I especially liked Kurogane's reaction to Fai's return.

And now we have Doumeki *sparkles* how I love him and Watanuki interacting.

[shadow_of_egypt]

Your icon just gave me hiccups. *started laughing, and then hiccuping, and now can't stop*

Doumeki and Watapon - the stoic versus the spazz. They're fun to write like that, if a bit awkward at the same time. *still getting the hang of their characterisation*

[youkohiei_fan]

^^; I do love crack icons lol

It's hard to get Doumeki IC...he doesn't talk much and his character is more based on his actions, not to mention trying to get his interactions with any characters down.