Protect Me, Love Me - Chapter 10

Aug 01, 2008 07:26


Chapter 10

“Remembrance”

“Talking”

‘Thinking’

^Flashback^        ^End Flashback^

Disclaimer - I do not own Four Brothers

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Monday morning Jack woke groaning, head pounding, and he opened his eyes carefully. It was still dark out ‘5:10am’ from the look outside and Jack’s body was aching. He always got these feelings ( Read more... )

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ngirl16 August 1 2008, 15:49:45 UTC
I'm glade Jack confided in Bobby about some of his past another great chapter can't wait till tuesday to read more

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shadow1290 August 1 2008, 16:50:24 UTC
Didn't you read the A.N.? Go read it!! lol there's something important there! then get back to me lol!

~shadow

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ngirl16 August 1 2008, 16:06:39 UTC
Please please please post another chapter today

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shadow1290 August 1 2008, 16:51:32 UTC
LOL!! I might I wanna see if I get anymore reviews... if I get three more by the end of the day I'll post it!

~shadow

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angle1buffy August 1 2008, 19:39:36 UTC
Post it. I hate waiting all week. This is one of the stories that I anticipate all week for. I love It

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shadow1290 August 1 2008, 20:47:23 UTC
Lol I might I need two more people to review then I'll post.. I want a certian number of reviews before I post it.

I update twice a week, Tuesdays and Fridays now... I have for a week or two! lol

But ya I want to get the next two chapters out of the way 'cause then things start to pick up!

~shadow

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ngirl16 August 2 2008, 01:43:04 UTC
I've had a pretty bad day today please make it better and tell me your posting the next chapter

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shadow1290 August 2 2008, 01:49:28 UTC
You cheated!! You posted three separte times!!! but... since you have always been a faithful review-er? lol I'll post it now!

... plus I wanna get these next few chapters out of the way!

Look for it!

~shadow

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thedeadletmego August 3 2008, 20:06:14 UTC
It's so sad what happened to Jack and everything. I love this chapter though and how it shows a bit of how Angel and his drug thing.

~Amaranth~

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shadow1290 August 3 2008, 20:18:55 UTC
Thanks, Sami. And ya I was re-watching the movie when I wrote this part and I saw the part in the beginning where Green says something about Angel being a hustler.

I had to put something in it and this shows how and why Angel got out of it, you know?

ttyl

~shadow

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thedeadletmego August 3 2008, 20:24:48 UTC
Yeah and I liked how you put it in there. I never noticed that. I always wondered how people knew Angel did drugs and stuff. I completely forgot about how they mentioned him being a hustler in the beginning.

~Amaranth~

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shadow1290 August 5 2008, 00:59:25 UTC
Sami, I forgot to ask and I'm too lazy to open my e-mail.. can you send me some of your Bobby/Jack pics!! I love 'em!

~shadow

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