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lykaios December 26 2004, 03:34:09 UTC
"Because," Remus said, stepping away from the camera and sitting next to Sirius on the couch. "I'm tired of looking at old photographs. I want to be able to see us like this." He elbowed Sirius in the rib, but then placed a stiff arm around Sirius' shoulder. "Don't forget to smile," he added.

Oh. That was beautiful.

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throughadoor January 2 2005, 05:50:09 UTC
thank you!

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musesfool December 26 2004, 07:23:21 UTC
Remus looked straight into the camera when it flashed, but he rather imagined that his developed image would betray him later, and that he'd see himself looking just to the side, only at Sirius.

Oh. That's just... *sniffle* Lovely.

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throughadoor January 2 2005, 04:32:26 UTC
aww, thank you!

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hiddendaze December 26 2004, 15:49:46 UTC
ADORE IT. What you did with the photo motif was wonderful! Oh, my heart went out to Sirius with his cryptic confession about the house photo. And this was such a pretty opening: like the shown-through light of the stars painted behind him. They're real, and I love that it's not a grand romance but it so obviously is.

Thanks so much for a fantastic present!

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throughadoor January 2 2005, 04:33:46 UTC
yay! i'm so glad that you enjoyed this! working within the motif of photographs was a lot of fun, this was a wonderful request prompt. thanks for giving me the opportunity to write this!

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callmesandy December 26 2004, 19:45:33 UTC
Oh, man, this was fantastic. I love what you do with the photographs here and the dialogue between them. Awesome!!

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throughadoor January 2 2005, 04:34:12 UTC
hey, thank you!

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sheafrotherdon December 26 2004, 23:00:29 UTC
I love this! Remus offering hemlock, Sirius asking if he could have it iced -- I cackled. Deftly done, to pin down their humor even amid such trying circumstances.

And the photographs -- what a mesmorizing theme, and oh how I loved that last line :) Beautiful.

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throughadoor January 2 2005, 04:35:12 UTC
i have hiddendaze to thank for requesting photographs -- thanks so much for letting me know you enjoyed this!

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