Comments | shackinup_sesa: Our Private Universe (part 1 of 2) by <strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/busaikko">busaikko</a></strong>

shackinup_sesa

Our Private Universe (part 1 of 2) by busaikko

Dec 24, 2005 22:07

Title: Our Private Universe
Author: busaikko
Summary: Watch Remus, Peter said, look for evidence; but what Sirius found was something different. Christmas 1979.
Rating: NC17
Warning: senile dementia of a sort
Recipient: imochan who asked for post-Hogwarts pre-Azkaban era; non-shmoopy AU (one could say the AU starts here); awkward, boyish moments, the ( Read more... )

for imochan, post-hogwarts, by busaikko, au, su_sesa 2005, fic

Comments 15

waxrose December 27 2005, 03:34:14 UTC

This is utterly, truly lovely. It hurts and makes me breathless. I just had to read it twice through. Beautiful work.

busaikko January 1 2006, 11:34:15 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked the story!

waxrose January 1 2006, 18:39:55 UTC

Oh, you're the one responsible for this little beauty? Well, you did a wonderful job! *fangirls*

busaikko January 2 2006, 07:52:28 UTC

Thanks! Hope to see you around!

maraudersaffair January 1 2006, 19:12:44 UTC

Yes, I really like Sirius's character in this one.

He is just so caring, and Lupin too.

WONDERFUL!

busaikko January 2 2006, 07:52:03 UTC

Thank you! I7m glad you enjoy!

girlnamedxena January 1 2006, 19:54:32 UTC

That is so sad. I don't think I can even bring myself to read the second part because it's too sad *shakes head* That's not a bad thing though- I just don't want to be sad right now. It has nothing to do with your writing.

busaikko January 2 2006, 07:51:48 UTC

Well, part 2 might not be sad--it all depends on you (open-ended AU). I will tell you though that there is a scene which made me positively squirm with vicarious embarassment for poor Remus... up to you!

girlnamedxena January 2 2006, 07:53:33 UTC

mrm... weeeeeell, squirmy embarassment is always good. If it makes me depressed I will blame you. totally and completely :P

busaikko January 2 2006, 08:12:49 UTC

Well... it's squirmy horrid embarassment....

If you blame me, I reserve the right to develop a complex! But it is a lady-or-the-tiger ending, so if you think it ends badly you've only yourself JKR to blame!

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celerywench January 2 2006, 16:04:08 UTC

You're breaking my heart love, you really are.

This is fantastic. I love this insight into Remus's life and how Sirius came to suspect Remus and all of that. It's so sad too. :( but beautifully done.

busaikko January 3 2006, 12:59:49 UTC

Thank you! I hope you managed to get through the story... it doesn't get much less painful....

nellie_darlin January 30 2006, 16:06:23 UTC

I wondered if this was you. Or rather, I didn't wonder at the time but now I know it's you I don't know how I missed it. This was fantastic, such a moody atmosphere with a measured, almost lilting tone to it. The characterisation was spot-on, and Mr Lupin was most convincing. And as ever, the angst was PERFECT.

I read this right at the beginning, so I need to read it again to give more detailed feedback, but I remember being completely hooked by this, and getting the usual response to one of your fics, which is the feeling your heart has been stamped on.

busaikko December 6 2006, 11:03:54 UTC

Hello! I've only, like, ignored this comment for a year, please excuse me! Thank you so much for reading!