I liked the characterisations. And Sirius's inability to say anything. And "It's not that he thinks Remus would stop if he let go of the headboard, he just doesn't want to test him." (Ha. 'Pfft, you wouldn't stop. But, uh... I'll do what you say anyway.') ...and the porn. :D
But how old are they supposed to be? I kept switching back and forth in my head from school-age to 30s. Can they be any age we want? Was there an age you were imagining when you wrote it?
I liked the characterisations. And Sirius's inability to say anything. And "It's not that he thinks Remus would stop if he let go of the headboard, he just doesn't want to test him." (Ha. 'Pfft, you wouldn't stop. But, uh... I'll do what you say anyway.')
Exactly. =)
But how old are they supposed to be?
I was thinking right out of school, but, really, any age that works best for you.
I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for the feedback!
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*Laughs until she cries*
Oh, that's BRILLIANT! *g*
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I love the dialogue. "Hi" indeed.
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I liked the characterisations. And Sirius's inability to say anything. And "It's not that he thinks Remus would stop if he let go of the headboard, he just doesn't want to test him." (Ha. 'Pfft, you wouldn't stop. But, uh... I'll do what you say anyway.') ...and the porn. :D
But how old are they supposed to be? I kept switching back and forth in my head from school-age to 30s. Can they be any age we want? Was there an age you were imagining when you wrote it?
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*hides face* God, I suck at titles.
I liked the characterisations. And Sirius's inability to say anything. And "It's not that he thinks Remus would stop if he let go of the headboard, he just doesn't want to test him." (Ha. 'Pfft, you wouldn't stop. But, uh... I'll do what you say anyway.')
Exactly. =)
But how old are they supposed to be?
I was thinking right out of school, but, really, any age that works best for you.
I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for the feedback!
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So hot.
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::dies::
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