Fabulous, just wonderful. I totally loved it from start to finish. *claps* Bravo! *blushes* *bows* Thank you so much. So glad you liked it. Thank you so much for commenting!
I actually noticed a bunch in your second to last fic that you've posted and one in your last fic that you posted. I wasn't sure if you were getting annoyed at me or not because I kept finding typos, so I didn' t say anything, buf if you want, I can leave a comment on those fics to let you know. :)
No, I don't mind... The last two were a little rushed... I, unfortunately, feel like I'm rushing some of these prompts before the 15th and with my off days...grrr... and also, I didn't have anyone beta - and I usually can't live without one! trust me, I know I usually have errors! feel free to let me know - or email me! thanks! trust me, I know my grammar really sucks sometimes... and i've worked on one of the last two a little late at night - not good... ah! gotta run! i hate this no lj time! i'm trying to answer comments and write and get everything i can in! it sucks! ahh! i hope you're well! oh! oh! send me the links to your dress pics again! i'm going to try to look for the earrings at Laila either this week or next... besides, i think someone has a birthday coming up! ;)
Loved it! You're on a roll lately. LOL, I'm trying! (Some are okay, some are so-so, some are total crap! oh well, lol!)
This was beautiful. And in third person POV!!!! SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! *is a nerd* I'm soooooo glad you liked! Yeah, switching around with the POV's... just for practice and with whatever feels right at the time!
Seriously, wonderful work. You're too kind!
I feel like I'm in creative writing class! Trying hard to create and finish assignments! Some score, some don't! But it's all good! It's practice, right? ;)
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*blushes* *bows* Thank you so much. So glad you liked it. Thank you so much for commenting!
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One minor typo: She puts her hands on her hips. “What are saying?”
You need a "you" after "are" in there. :)
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Thanks! Glad that you liked it!
..and thanks for pointing out my typos! I fixed 'em!
I guess my eyes were getting tired! ;)
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I actually noticed a bunch in your second to last fic that you've posted and one in your last fic that you posted. I wasn't sure if you were getting annoyed at me or not because I kept finding typos, so I didn' t say anything, buf if you want, I can leave a comment on those fics to let you know. :)
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The last two were a little rushed... I, unfortunately, feel like I'm rushing some of these prompts before the 15th and with my off days...grrr... and also, I didn't have anyone beta - and I usually can't live without one! trust me, I know I usually have errors! feel free to let me know - or email me! thanks! trust me, I know my grammar really sucks sometimes... and i've worked on one of the last two a little late at night - not good... ah! gotta run! i hate this no lj time! i'm trying to answer comments and write and get everything i can in! it sucks! ahh! i hope you're well! oh! oh! send me the links to your dress pics again! i'm going to try to look for the earrings at Laila either this week or next... besides, i think someone has a birthday coming up! ;)
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Aww!!! It's so cute!!
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Aww!!! It's so cute!!
*giggles*
Aw, thanks! SO glad you liked! ;)
thanks for commenting!
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Seriously, wonderful work.
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LOL, I'm trying! (Some are okay, some are so-so, some are total crap! oh well, lol!)
This was beautiful. And in third person POV!!!! SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! *is a nerd*
I'm soooooo glad you liked! Yeah, switching around with the POV's... just for practice and with whatever feels right at the time!
Seriously, wonderful work.
You're too kind!
I feel like I'm in creative writing class! Trying hard to create and finish assignments! Some score, some don't! But it's all good! It's practice, right? ;)
*hugs*
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