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[sgr11]

Fic:   Untitled / possibly "Days of Lost"
Beta:  None (but needed!)
Pairing:  Cameron/House, Cameron/Chase
Rating:  R
Spoilers: S3 through S4
Summary:  Allison hides a relationship she had with House.
Disclaimer:  I don't own any of them.

Note:

I haven't written in so long... I jotted this out... and I'm happy that I finally wrote something.  THAT feels

Comments

[sgr11]

I liked what was going on here as it was packed with lots of stuff and emotion.
Thank you.

I liked the comparison between her House & Chase relationships. It did make me a bit sad that she is merely 'okay' about being with Chase because I imagine he treats her rather well. Probably much better than those fleeting moments House gave her.
This is all very true... and fleeting is probably a very good word to use. It was meant to be sad though... :( There needed to be a certain sense of dissatisfaction with everything - her life, her "relationships" with Chase and House...

I think you can trim it down with some edits because in parts it is a bit repetitive, but you won't have to worry about losing that emotional punch as you have a lot of description throughout.
Thanks for the advice... yes, there was some repetition - some of it on purpose... like something that is hounding her, you know? This piece was just a 'starter' piece for me, so I'm really not interested in editing it, though it would probably be good practice. I haven't posted it elsewhere... though trying to decide if I should.

Thank you so much for your feedback!