H50 fic: A'ole ho'okahi

Feb 19, 2012 02:23

Title: A'ole ho'okahi
Characters/Pairings: Danny, Steve
Rating: PG-13
Genre: gen, angst
Word Count: 1,715
Warnings/Spoilers: Spoilers for the first 3 episodes of Season 2.
Disclaimer: I own nothing, just having fun.
Author's Notes: Part 3 of the Iho Aka 'A'ole Waho series, or as I like to call it, the Depressed!Danny series.
Part 1: KaumahaPart 2 ( Read more... )

gen, hawaii five-0, fic, angst, angst_bingo

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ranereins February 19 2012, 08:26:00 UTC
Love it! So glad Danny and Steve finally talked it out.

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sgflutegirl February 19 2012, 08:29:24 UTC
Thank you!! :D

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sgflutegirl February 20 2012, 01:00:57 UTC
Thank you so much!!

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huntress69 February 20 2012, 04:13:54 UTC
Danny's got a good shrink and they are hard to come by. That conversation with Steve needed to happen and I could honestly see a similar conversation ending up in canon at some point. I may not always comment due to fic overload LOL, but I do read your work and will try to comment more often.

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sgflutegirl February 20 2012, 04:17:19 UTC
Thank you so much!! I'd love a convo like this on the show. I totally understand the fic overload. No worries.

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embroiderama February 20 2012, 04:19:49 UTC
Aw, Danny! I love how they finally connect at the end.

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sgflutegirl February 20 2012, 04:20:55 UTC
Thank you! :D

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kitmerlot1213 February 20 2012, 15:19:44 UTC
I do agree that in the beginning of the season, the Steve/Danny banter seemed off, almost like Steve had an under lying anger to all of his words. But as the season wore on, they seemed to loosen up and get their groove back so thank you for including that in your fic. Danny can always turn to Steve to talk and I hope Danny remembers that they next time he's feeling bad.

Danny didn’t know Lori well enough, and she just rubbed him the wrong way. You and me both, Danny. You and me both :)

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sgflutegirl February 20 2012, 18:25:28 UTC
Thank you so much!! To me, everything felt off for awhile. So, I know in this situation, Danny would have felt it the worst.

I think a lot of people felt that way.

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