H50 fic: Looking at Closed Eyes

Feb 09, 2012 20:36

Title: Looking at Closed Eyes
Characters/Pairings: Danny, Steve, Kono, Chin
Rating: PG-13
Genre: gen, h/c, angst
Word Count: 1,319
Warnings/Spoilers: Mild language and some violence.
Disclaimer: I own nothing, just having fun.
Author's Notes: Written for the prompt 'Closed eyes' given to me by violetvision78This was also written for the prompt 'Head Conk' on my ( Read more... )

gen, hawaii five-0, fic, angst, h/c

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violetinstincts February 13 2012, 06:22:41 UTC
I am writing this reply while reading: read...type...read...type

When the bad guy dropped dead, I yelled "yyyyyeeeeessss serves him right!"

The closed eyes thing scaring him really got to me then I went wait...I thought this was not suppose to be angst per you saying you needed non angst prompts...LOL! Then I told myself to shut up because the fic is great so far.

His throat being bruised and problems breathing go along with me being sick right now and coughing, so even though I would not want to be sick or see him hurt...It works! I'm on a steroid shot too. I feel his pain.

"Oh and the reason why there was nothing on the scan, it's because he is a vampire." Little Zoe Shannon from Terra Nova interjected smiling. *Violet shakes her head at her* "Wrong show."

Zoe chimes in again, "Put him in the sarcophagus." *Violet shakes her head again* "Nooo, wrong show again."

Zoe folds her arms, "Just get the Cylon to make him another body." "Zoe, that's a different show. Kono is not a Cylon."
"Yes she is." "No shes not Sharon." Zoe smiles, "Ddduuuu there are many copies." *Violet - dead desk - pauses Terra Nova theme music to stop Zoe talking while reading the fic*

Zoe leans forward, "I didn't know the guy from lost was part Cylon." Violet is afraid to ask, "He is not. Why do you think he is part Cylon." Zoe smiles all knowing, "He's Sharon's cousin." *Violet turns off the other computer screen's monitor to keep Zoe away even though she is growing on Violet*

Love the ending! *hugs*

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sgflutegirl February 13 2012, 06:49:04 UTC
LMAO!!! That reply totally made my night!! Thank you for that!

I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

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violetinstincts February 13 2012, 07:33:00 UTC
:)

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