Comments | sgflutegirl: H50 fic: Ohana Mau Loa

sgflutegirl

H50 fic: Ohana Mau Loa

Apr 29, 2011 02:43

Title: Ohana Mau Loa
Characters/Pairings: Grace, Steve/Danny
Rating: PG-13
Genre: angst, death!fic, mentions of slash
Word Count: 1,365
Spoilers: mentions an incident that happened in E Malama
Warnings: MAJOR CHARACTER DEATHS
Disclaimer: I own nothing, just having fun.
Author's Notes: Written for the 'family' and 'end' squares of the Big Bang ( Read more... )

hawaii five-0, fic, angst, slash, death!fic

Comments 47

ranereins April 29 2011, 08:12:40 UTC

This is really, really good, but... you know. :(

sgflutegirl April 29 2011, 08:13:35 UTC

Yes! I know! I don't even know what to say.

Thanks!

wolwiegirl3 April 29 2011, 16:52:48 UTC

oh my, it was really good, but so sad :( I just have one concrit : I think that Grace's voice sounds a little bit too childish from the moment she's sixteen to the funerals... but her feeling are really well written though ! :)

sgflutegirl April 29 2011, 16:55:10 UTC

Thank you so much!

Thanks for the concrit. I'm still finding her voice, and it definitely helps.

maab_connor April 29 2011, 17:03:24 UTC

beautiful ;__;

now quit writing the sad ones, flute! lol

sgflutegirl April 29 2011, 17:05:12 UTC

Thank you!

LOL! I'll do my best.

nanichick_5 April 29 2011, 18:21:25 UTC

why is you so evil?? not good...but it is soooo goood. And for some reason I can see Grace growing up to be a cop. And can you help me I'm trying to post a one shot but I don't know how to do it can you help? Thank you!!

sgflutegirl April 29 2011, 18:28:12 UTC

My brain is a scary, scary place. I just don't even know.

Sure, I can give you a hand. What do you need?

nanichick_5 April 29 2011, 21:38:50 UTC

I have a story that I want to post on the "Waves of Love" home page thingy and I don't know how to do it. :(

sgflutegirl April 29 2011, 21:43:40 UTC

First, you have to be a member of the comm. Then you'd just post it like a post in your own LJ. If you go to their profile page, there is info on what is needed in your post, and there is a "Post" link at the top right of the page. Make sure you read everything in the profile before posting. Then you basically copy/paste the fic and then format it how you want.

Let me know if you need anything else.

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somehowunbroken April 29 2011, 18:38:55 UTC

I have tears in my eyes right now. Wow. That last line is really, really touching.

sgflutegirl April 29 2011, 18:51:19 UTC

Thank you so much for reading. I had tears in my eyes as I was writing it.