A NEW RULE BY wildcat88 [LFWS #1 ROUND 8]

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Title: A New Rule
Author: wildcat88
Rating: G
Disclaimer: Stargate belongs to Metro-Goldwyn-Mayer Studios Inc., no infringements of any rights is intended.
Spoilers: None
Prompt for the Round: Write a fic using any character(s) from the show that does not appear in the opening credits. No main characters are allowed.

Comments

[linziday]

Loved this! You had me at "when a scientist says, “Uh-oh” grab him or her and run. Don’t waste time asking questions like, “What’s wrong, Doc?” because Bad Things Are Going To Happen." *snorfle*

Great action, nice details, good description, fantastic job writing Lorne. A lot packed into so few words!

[wildcat88]

Thank you! Lorne and Zelenka are such wonderful characters. I especially love Lorne's sarcastic wit. So glad you enjoyed.

[rustydog]

Great opening and closing line, good description and action in the middle.

[wildcat88]

Thank you so much! I appreciate the feedback and I'm delighted you liked the story.

[everybetty]

You had me at Lorne peeling off his tee shirt ;) And I second the best line award as linziday noted. Lorne and Radek may be B-team, but this is an A fic. Congrats, R-.

[wildcat88]

Hee! I had an opportunity, and I took it. Lorne without a shirt = a very good thing. :) I'm thrilled you enjoyed it, E. Thanks again.