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FALLING BY rhymer23 [LFWS #1 ROUND 7]

Jan 26, 2009 09:19

Title: Falling
Author: rhymer23
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Stargate belongs to Metro-Goldwyn-Mayer Studios Inc., no infringements of any rights is intended.
Spoilers: Set shortly after Broken Ties, and includes spoilers for that episode and for Search and Rescue
Prompt for the Round: Write a whump fic using Ronon with the team (any or all). Ronon POV. No other ( Read more... )

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Comments 5

wildcat88 January 26 2009, 15:30:06 UTC

I really like this. The whump is great, the team dynamic is perfect, and the comparison to Broken Ties is stunning. Nicely done.

trystings January 26 2009, 17:57:47 UTC

Ooh, this is great. So much packed in 400 words, both physically and in Ronon's mind.

writerjc January 27 2009, 03:39:54 UTC

Wow - that was fantastic. Totally didnt see the jumper coming. Thank you for saving them both. :)

tzzzz January 27 2009, 08:16:01 UTC

That was great. Very visceral for being so short!

linzi5 January 30 2009, 19:59:51 UTC

Wonderful! What a star you are! A really tense story with so much friendship. The whump wasn't bad either... not that I'm a fan of it or anything! Riiiiight! Believe that and you'll believe anything! HEHE! Great job! :)