HOLDING ON (A) BY annieb1955 [LFWS #1 ROUND 4]

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Title: Holding On
Author: annieb1955
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Stargate belongs to Metro-Goldwyn-Mayer Studios Inc., no infringements of any rights is intended.
Spoilers: None
Prompt for the Round: Write a whump fic with John and ONE of his team. John POV.

Comments

[drufan]

This a nice tight story. We get insight into the characters as well as the action in a very short piece. And both Rodney and John stay well within character.

Holding on

[fifi_02]

Oh yes. John and Rodney friendship. My favourite.

[wildcat88]

I really liked how this is setup - the different expressions of Rodney leading up to the one that shows how bad off John is. Nicely done.

Holding on

[anonymous]

Nice. You did a great job of showing us a realistic emotional response from Rodney over John's condition and their situation (waiting for help to arrive). I love frantic Rodney, but we know he isn't always frantic and panicky in times of dire circumstances. Nice imagery.

[sholio]

I really enjoyed this; very sweet.