Fic: Balancing Blue and Gold

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Title: Balancing Blue and Gold
Author: moonlettuce
Pairing: Sheppard/McKay
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: Very slight ones for The Return
Recipient: yin_again
Author Notes: yin_again asked for: McKay/Sheppard, McKay/Sheppard/OMC, porn, rimming, light bondage, action/adventure, obscure crossover. I hit half of them. Hope you enjoy, and Merry Christmas.

Comments

[yin_again]

*beams*

It's exactly what I wanted! Thank you so, so much. I just loved the whole tone and jealous John is never a bad thing, but this:

Wanted to hold Rodney down and push into the tight heat that had done nothing but welcome him. Wanted to reach out and take, with nothing to stop him but the words from Rodney's mouth. No and stop and a hundred other words he'd heard Rodney say to everyone else but him.

was just guh!

Thank you so much for the lovey gift of porn.

[moonlettuce]

I am so pleased you liked this :D Because I totally panicked, and I'd never written rimming before, so yay :D

[amothea]

I liked this. :)

[moonlettuce]

Thank you!

[filenotch]

People nodded at him, smiled as he passed them, but blue merged into black merged into another faceless corridor ahead of him.

Very effective.

[moonlettuce]

That's one of the lines I love, so I'm really pleased the imagery worked :D

[aesc]

"Oh, I would," Rodney promised. "I'd come after you, John Sheppard."

Oh, lovely. What a visceral, immediate piece of writing. Just fabulous.

[moonlettuce]

*grin* Thank you!

[shara50]

That was awesome.

[moonlettuce]

Glad you enjoyed :D