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Fic: Nowhere are there more hiding places than in the heart

Dec 21, 2006 22:32

Title: Nowhere are there more hiding places than in the heart
Author: amothea
Pairing: Sheppard/McKay
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: None
Word Count: 6,600
Recipient: pushkin666
Author Notes: I'd like to thank icarusancalion for beta reading this story. She went WAY above and beyond the call of duty in helping me with this story. She's a ruthless taskmaster and she wouldn't let me ( Read more... )

pairing: mckay/sheppard, genre: slash

Comments 22

littlebuttercup December 22 2006, 05:18:25 UTC

... but what was John's indiscretion? I must know!

I've always liked aliens-made-them-do-it fic, but I especially loved the twist with John not being able to see/speak and Rodney not being able to hear.

littlebuttercup December 23 2006, 08:50:48 UTC

sadly, the villagers just said that as part of a test. Also I'm glad that you enjoyed the twist. :)

emma_in_oz December 22 2006, 08:58:26 UTC

I love them struggling with communication yet really being so darn good at understanding each other.

emma_in_oz December 23 2006, 08:51:32 UTC

Hey, I'm glad I was able to get that across in this story. :) thanks for the feedback. :)

wyrdfae December 22 2006, 22:56:34 UTC

I also wish to know of this indescretion.
it was good and I liked how there was a big giant bed and they didnt guess what they were suposed to do :-)

wyrdfae December 23 2006, 08:49:37 UTC

i had this whole other ending that kind of explained the whole purpose of what happened and why...but I think it brought up more questions than it answered...so it kind of got cut.

Basically, no one did anything wrong this time. It was part of the test.

I think before I post this on my own LJ or fan fiction site I'll consider revising the ending, it was the part that gave a lot of trouble and I was already late turning it in. :(

adafrog December 24 2006, 23:23:08 UTC

I love them interacting with their impairments. Just goes to show they're perfect together. :D

amothea January 1 2007, 18:41:54 UTC

I'm glad the impairments aspect worked in this story. My friend just about laughed herself sick when I told her this story idea and that I thought it would be easier to pull off...but 9 days after the deadline and four drafts later...

_bettina_ December 26 2006, 13:07:56 UTC

Heh. I enjoyed this! :-)

amothea January 1 2007, 18:40:50 UTC

thanks. :)