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Fic: Frail Fibers, Overstrung

Dec 17, 2006 10:39

Title: Frail Fibers, Overstrung
Author: tielan
Pairing: John/Teyla
Rating: R
Recipient: roguish_angel
Spoilers: None
Summary: "Love is of all passions the strongest, for it attacks simultaneously the head, the heart and the senses."

( Frail Fibers, Overstrung )

pairing: emmagan/sheppard, genre: het

Comments 6

jaekayelle December 17 2006, 19:19:16 UTC

Mmm Lovely. I can *smell* the scents described. Your writing evokes all of the senses. Beautiful.

tielan January 2 2007, 04:43:57 UTC

Thank you!

emma_in_oz December 17 2006, 21:56:39 UTC

This is so evocative.

I like the use of Teyla's pov, alien and yet human.

tielan January 2 2007, 04:44:53 UTC

I realised that I'm more used to writing John/Teyla stories from John' perspective - he is an easier character for me to 'voice', although I like Teyla for the possibilities in her character.

But I'm glad that the Teyla POV worked for you.

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tielan January 2 2007, 04:45:06 UTC

Thank you!

vipersweb January 30 2007, 00:22:07 UTC

he. I thought I commented on this...

Anyway, I like how this plays out... The evolution of their relationship and her thoughts on him. Very lovely, very evocative.