Fic: Give Me Strength (McKay/Sheppard, PG-13)

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Title: Give Me Strength
Author: gryphon2k
Recipient: syndelar
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Not mine, wish they were.
Author's Notes: I wanted to try an experiment writing a dialogue-only fic. Hopefully it will amuse.
Summary: McKay and Sheppard crash on an unknown planet. Both are injured, and need to stay awake until help can arrive.

Comments

[margec01]

I think your dialogue fic worked great. Snarky, funny, and yet touching. I laughed out loud in a couple places, firstly at:

Explain the physics of the stargate to me."

"Sorry, not going to spend my last hour in a pointless exercise in futility."

LOL

Great story!

[shetiger]

Oh, nice job! I could follow this easily, even without dialogue attributions - their voices were very clear. And it was tense, too, with some cute and sweet points along the way. :)

[tarlanx]

Enjoyed the story... so glad the Daedalus arrived in time!

[mific]

Nicely done, although now I'm worried Rodney's going to bleed out when he's beamed up with out the conduit in him - but I'm sure the Daedalus doctor can handle it and fix him up. :)

[danceswithgary]

Your dialogue experiment was a success, great job with the voices! :-D