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Fic: Lovely Constellation (McKay/Sheppard, PG)

Dec 23, 2010 10:46

Title: Lovely Constellation
Author: Santa
Recipient: bluespirit_star
Pairing: John/Rodney
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: John and Rodney belong to Atlantis and each other. None of them belong to me.
Author's Notes: Title comes from a quote by Amy Tan ~ I am like a falling star who has finally found her place next to another in a lovely constellation, where we will ( Read more... )

pairing: mckay/sheppard, genre: slash

Comments 29

Thank you, Santa! \o/ bluespirit_star December 23 2010, 12:02:51 UTC

Oh, oh, oh!

This...

"Shooting stars are awesome?" John offered again. "And kind of romantic?" Rodney rolled his eyes. "And you can make wishes on them."

And this...

"Rodney, we live in a fairy tale."

Then this...

"Whatever you say, Princess." John slid a little to the right until he was standing directly in front of Rodney, hands automatically gravitating to the other man's hips.

Rodney squawked in outrage even as he stepped closer and slotted into place between John's legs . "Princess? If anyone's the princess here it's you with the impossible hair and pouty lips."

And, of course, this...

"I've already got you," John said reasonably. He grabbed McKay's hand again, linking their fingers and pushing him back slightly so John could swing them around and pull Rodney from the room.

McKay sighed and let himself be dragged out the door before answering with a smile, "Yes, you do."*melts ( ... )

Re: Thank you, Santa! \o/ lilyleia78 January 3 2011, 05:10:06 UTC

::blushes:: I'm so glad you liked it! It was a lot of fun to write. I was so nervous/excited to have gotten you in the exchange, and it's wonderful to hear it gave you some joy for Christmas. Happy (belated) holidays.

danceswithgary December 23 2010, 13:25:22 UTC

Awww, sweet! :-D

lilyleia78 January 3 2011, 05:04:16 UTC

Thank you!

aqualegia December 23 2010, 17:04:36 UTC

Very nice. I liked the way that John got Rodney to go look at 'stars' with him.

lilyleia78 January 3 2011, 05:04:37 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

crooked_halo8 December 23 2010, 19:25:18 UTC

Adorable! That bit of happiness and banter hit the spot. :)

lilyleia78 January 3 2011, 05:05:02 UTC

Oh, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

silver_cyanne December 24 2010, 01:38:55 UTC

This is a lovely fic. And I really liked this exchange, it's so very them-

"Rodney, we live in a fairy tale." John reminded him raising one hand towards the ceiling demonstratively as he made the lights dim with a thought.

Rodney grunted, clearly unimpressed. "No, we live in a legend: there's a difference."

lilyleia78 January 3 2011, 05:05:31 UTC

^_^ Thank you! That's my favorite thing to hear.