Fic: A Fist Full of Power Bars (Gen, G)

Dec 19, 2010 02:27

Title: A Fist Full of Power Bars
Author: ozsaur
Recipient: telesilla
Pairing: Gen
Rating: G
Disclaimer: Not mine...
Author's Notes: I would like to thank dustandroses and my husband for beta.
Summary: Sometimes you win.

A Fist Full of Power Bars )

genre: general

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psychicvanity December 19 2010, 03:58:54 UTC
Oh my goodness, that is inspired! I laughed and laughed and laughed. Santa, you are a genius and I salute you. :D

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ozsaur January 5 2011, 19:19:30 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed the story!

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perspi December 19 2010, 04:06:42 UTC
That! Is! Perfection!! I love it. Especially that John's victory is so short-lived. *snerk*

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ozsaur January 5 2011, 19:21:17 UTC
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed the story!

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telesilla December 19 2010, 04:29:26 UTC
*dies* Oh man, poor John! He's so sure he's finally beaten Ronon at something! I love all your character voices, but most particularly I adore your sweetly snarky Teyla! She's awesome.

And I'm glad for the end notes; I'd have been sad if the mirik died. :)

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telesilla December 19 2010, 04:44:36 UTC
I just realized that in my enthusiasm I neglected to say "thank you!" So yes, thank you very much Santanon! You made a cold rainy day much better.

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ozsaur January 5 2011, 19:26:36 UTC
I'm so relieved that you liked the story. I was all set to write something very kinky and then... gen happened. You gave some great prompts, and I was very excited about them. I'm so glad that you are not disappointed.

I had fun writing the story, and I love snarky Teyla. I'm so happy you like your story!

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danceswithgary December 19 2010, 05:02:54 UTC
Cute! I'm just imagining the mirik and how it gave Ronon fits. :-D

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ozsaur January 5 2011, 19:28:06 UTC
Thank you! Ronon chasing the mirik was fun to write.

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busaikko December 19 2010, 08:06:42 UTC
Oh, poor John! To try so hard and finally succeed, and then to fail so spectacularly... that's got to hurt (his pride, that is). I am glad for the epilog; knowing that no animals were harmed in the making of the fic has me grinning now *g*

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ozsaur January 5 2011, 19:31:12 UTC
Thank you! I know when I read a story where an animal is injured, I have to know if everything turned out okay. The epilogue was a fun bit to write.

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