Very cute. And yes, John really doesn't see it coming. I liked seeing how he made the comparisons between Daniel and Rodney, without really realizing what was going on.
I very much liked the comedy in this, and poor John - clueless, even to his own reasons for doing what he does.
I think one of my favourite parts is this one:
It’s all blah blah blah something about “you'd bruise your hips on his scrawny ass”, as Rodney’s hands slide under the back of his shirt and drag over his ribs. And blah blah “but he couldn't give a blowjob to save his life” as Rodney’s lips place feathery kisses down John’s jugular. blah blah blah “oh, yeah, and I can hold you down so you can't get away, look at me, John, I'm solid” breathed into John’s ear.
So Rodney, that. But of course, I read, "but he couldn't give a blowjob to save his life," and I was just, :woah:, excuse me? And how do you, Mister McKay, know that, exactly? :LOL:
Thanks again for writing this. Excellent, fun story, well written. I couldn't have asked for better.
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I very much liked the comedy in this, and poor John - clueless, even to his own reasons for doing what he does.
I think one of my favourite parts is this one:
It’s all blah blah blah something about “you'd bruise your hips on his scrawny ass”, as Rodney’s hands slide under the back of his shirt and drag over his ribs. And blah blah “but he couldn't give a blowjob to save his life” as Rodney’s lips place feathery kisses down John’s jugular. blah blah blah “oh, yeah, and I can hold you down so you can't get away, look at me, John, I'm solid” breathed into John’s ear.
So Rodney, that. But of course, I read, "but he couldn't give a blowjob to save his life," and I was just, :woah:, excuse me? And how do you, Mister McKay, know that, exactly? :LOL:
Thanks again for writing this. Excellent, fun story, well written. I couldn't have asked for better.
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