Comments | sga_santa: Fic: Responsibility (Gen, PG)

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Fic: Responsibility (Gen, PG)

Dec 17, 2008 20:36

Title: Responsibility
Author: wildcat88
Recipient: skieswideopen
Pairing: None
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Lifeline
Summary: Temporarily in charge of Atlantis, John must find a way to repair a badly damaged city and keep her inhabitants alive.
A/N: Many thanks to kristen999 for the beta. All faults mine.

( Responsibility )

genre: general

Comments 14

skieswideopen December 17 2008, 23:40:20 UTC

Oh, I really like this! The build-up of disaster after disaster and the constant energy of trying to keep up with the problems is great. And I love the relationship between John and Ronon. And, of course, Ronon's secret ability to read Ancient. :)

Thank you!!!

wildcat88 January 2 2009, 22:15:43 UTC

*hugs* I'm so glad you liked it! I enjoyed the challenge of your request. It was fun!

scrollgirl December 18 2008, 20:47:17 UTC

Oh, this is awesome! I love seeing the entire city working together, fixing things and making Atlantis their home again. Love that Ronon can read a bit of Ancient (I think it makes sense for all Pegasus natives to know the basics, the way we know a bit of Latin) and going hunting for alien venison ;)

Great story!

wildcat88 January 2 2009, 22:17:40 UTC

Thank you! I love fic set in the city and don't write nearly enough of it. I'm delighted you enjoyed it.

calcitrix December 19 2008, 05:53:44 UTC

Loved the memorial names for the buildings; that was a nice background detail. Great read!

wildcat88 January 2 2009, 22:18:14 UTC

Thank you! I love little details. Glad you picked up on that.

missyvortexdv December 20 2008, 13:46:22 UTC

Nice look at that missing period. + hurray for having Ronon competant aat things other than fighting. :)

wildcat88 January 2 2009, 22:19:07 UTC

Thanks so much! There's a lot more to Ronon than he shows. Glad you liked.

kataren December 21 2008, 09:21:43 UTC

Scenes like these are/were sorely lacking in the series. Boo. Luckily, fandom has writers like you. :D I especially love John serious at work, a competent (man-of-the-house *snerk*) Ronon, Ronon & Rodney ganging up against John on chocolate... Also, the memorial names were a very nice touch. ^^

wildcat88 January 2 2009, 22:21:02 UTC

Thanks so much for the lovely compliment. I'm delighted you liked the fic. Competence was part of the request, and I enjoyed finding an area for them to be competent in that was different than fighting, tracking, etc.