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Fic: White Coral Islands in a Dark Blue Sea (McKay/Sheppard, R)

Dec 15, 2008 21:50

Title: White Coral Islands in a Dark Blue Sea
Author: rysler
Recipient: bitter_crimson
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard
Rating: R
Summary: Rodney's nightmares become real.
Notes: Passages in italics are from the Book of the Damned by Charles Fort, in the public domain.

( They'd come from the sea. The unexplored, untouched sea of the new planet. )

pairing: mckay/sheppard, genre: slash

Comments 22

bitter_crimson December 15 2008, 22:14:16 UTC

OH MANG I LOVE IT

SO MUCH

I grinned like a loon through the entire thing!

I feel like I need to go back and re-read it several more times to fully appreciate it, but oh, Rodney's obsessive fixation on zombies, and just KNOWING innately that John will protect him, and awww the sleeping on the floor! and Teyla's hygiene, and Ronon not thinking to mention the woman biting him, and I completely approve! Plus the whole story has an excellent creepy, surreal feel to it.

THERE CAN NEVER BE ENOUGH ZOMBIE SGA FIC IN MY WORLD ♥ ♥ ♥

THANK YOU SO MUCH, SANTA!!!

rysler January 1 2009, 22:53:26 UTC

You're welcome!!! I'm so glad you liked it. I loved your challenge until I ended up with it, and then I was like, "How do I write zombies an aficionado can embrace?" So much fun! Thank you!

tarlanx December 15 2008, 22:43:19 UTC

That was so sinister... Zombie stories are always so creepy...but good!

rysler January 1 2009, 22:53:49 UTC

Thank you!

xela_fic December 16 2008, 06:09:58 UTC

oh wow. uber creepy!!

Really interesting turn with Ronon too.

rysler January 1 2009, 22:54:17 UTC

Thank you! I was striving for creepy. :)

skinscript December 16 2008, 14:42:01 UTC

Poor Ronon! STuck in his nightmare with no Rodney or John to ground him.
:( I found the ending very sad because of that. *HUGS* for Ronon

Very creepy, and I do love how John and Rodney are the constants in each others' lives. Teyla is wonderfully believable here, as is Woolsey. And, well - everyone!

rysler January 1 2009, 22:55:06 UTC

:( I found the ending very sad because of that. *HUGS* for Ronon

I know. Poor Ronon. :(

Thank you so much for your feedback! My first time writing Woolsey, but apparently he lives inside me. Hm.

ceitie December 16 2008, 18:25:57 UTC

Zoooommmmbbbiiieeesss. Neat fic! I love that Rodney used the word "corpsified".

rysler January 1 2009, 22:57:53 UTC

eeee, thank you! Rodney is a big Firefly fan, of course. :)