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Fic: Postcards from the Corner Store (McKay/Sheppard)

Dec 24, 2007 11:32

Title: Postcards From The Corner Store
Author: moonlettuce
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard
Rating: PG
Recipient: enviropony
Spoilers: None
Summary: Welcome to Hell-shift at the C-Mart.
Author's Note: 1st person pov, outsider fic. enviropony wanted: McShep slash, visiting Earth, with or without Ronon and Teyla. The thing I love most about Earth fic is the sense of You-don't-know-what-we- ( Read more... )

pairing: mckay/sheppard, genre: slash

Comments 23

mcalex22 December 24 2007, 14:01:34 UTC

Ooh, I love the third person POV. I don't read it often and it's not always done right but I love what you've done here. It's lovely seeing the boys on Earth :)

Thanks for sharing :D

merelyn December 24 2007, 18:08:01 UTC

Aw!!! I love third person POV, and this is a lovely job.

incidental_fire December 24 2007, 18:50:59 UTC

This was delightful! I'm sometimes skeptical about 3rd person POV, but it was really well done here. I loved how she zoomed in on them making out, as any self-respecting slasher would. ;) Their bickering was perfect, and I liked how she just froze when the robber came, as I think most of us probably would, all training notwithstanding.

lunasky December 24 2007, 19:39:20 UTC

Aw...this was just too cute. I loved this outsider look at our boys. I can see them not being able to help themselves from being who they are. Wonderfully done.

goddess47 December 24 2007, 20:08:09 UTC

But all I can think is there's a gun pointing at me and who's going to feed the cat if something happens to me and there's a gun pointing at me.

Wonderful POV..... and the worry about the cat and getting shot in the same thought is so real..... and kissing in the back of the store... mmmm....

Very nice!