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Fic: Disarmed and Unbalanced (McKay/Sheppard)

Dec 19, 2007 21:30

Title: Disarmed and Unbalanced
Author: lavvyan
Pairing: John/Rodney
Rating: R
Recipient: hyperfocused
Spoilers: Everything up to and including 4x03 "Reunion"
Summary: The last time John saw Rodney, Rodney was dead.
Author's Note: Despite the summary, this isn't a death!fic. Thanks to raiining for her help with the medical stuff. Everything that's wrong I messed up myself. ( Read more... )

pairing: mckay/sheppard, genre: slash

Comments 159

busaikko December 19 2007, 22:03:49 UTC

Oh, that was lovely! Poor John -- I loved the hyperventilation scene, it made perfect sense. And loved the resolution, as well. Thank you!

lavvyan January 2 2008, 09:41:33 UTC

Thank you very much! I love dorky, panicked John so much, I could watch him flail his way through an emotional situation all day.

kassrachel December 19 2007, 22:04:44 UTC

And John's brain simply shuts down. Tilt, error, does not compute; and his eyes flutter closed without him telling them to because what else is there to do when Rodney is kissing him? What else but hang on and dig his fingers into Rodney's shoulder and kiss him back as long as Rodney will let him, because this has to be some mistake, because Rodney is his friend and friends don't kiss, because John can't believe that Rodney might be just as insane as he is.

OH BOYS!

This is lovely. :-)

lavvyan January 2 2008, 09:42:25 UTC

Thank you very much! ♥

the_cephalopod December 19 2007, 22:19:26 UTC

This was great - I really enjoyed it! Thank you. cep xxx

lavvyan January 2 2008, 09:42:45 UTC

Thank you, glad to know you liked!

ceitie December 20 2007, 01:11:16 UTC

I love John's POV here, and the way that he only works out exactly what he feels towards Rodney after Rodney nearly dies and is partially paralyzed. Also the kissing at the end made me go all *heart-clutch*. *g*

lavvyan January 2 2008, 09:43:56 UTC

Yes, well, Lt. Col. "I never see it coming" sometimes needs a little push to figure stuff out. *g*

Yay for heart-clutching, thank you!

gaffsie December 20 2007, 07:01:50 UTC

Thing is, he doesn't know how to explain how perversely cheated out of his self-sacrifice he feels without sounding utterly stupid and selfish - and it is stupid and selfish. That is perfect. It's such a stupidly *real* feeling to have.

I really loved this.

lavvyan January 2 2008, 09:44:55 UTC

Thank you! John is one messed-up human being.