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Fic: Keep on Moving (Dex/Zelenka)

Dec 15, 2007 23:20

Title: Keep on Moving
Author: zinfic
Rating: R
Pairing: Ronon/Radek
Word count: 6900
Disclaimer: I own nothing.
Spoilers: Runner and Sateda

Acknowledgements: Huge thanks to the_cephalopod for beta reading and assuring me that this didn’t suck. Equally huge thanks to tagetes and lavvyan for helping out with the Czech. You’re the best!

Notes/summary: Written for busaikko, ( Read more... )

pairing: dex/zelenka, genre: slash

Comments 15

busaikko December 16 2007, 07:26:31 UTC

Thank you so much! This is absolutely beautiful, so much more than I could have hoped for, I'm thrilled. I love the way you've used Ronon's expertise in running, his knowledge of survival, as a way that he affirms that he is neither prey nor animal, and how Zelenka picks up on this and discovers how to translate his own skills for survival and escape. I love the distinction Ronon makes between being forced to run for the Wraith and

In the city of the Ancestors, no one orders him to run. No one hunts him and forces him to run. Here, he can run because it feels good, because his body and mind craves it.

Ronon speeds up a little more, pushes on until he reaches that place inside where it feels like he’s flying.That's so heart-wrenching (and my heart loves being wrenched). And speaking of which, your ending! There is hope -- you've shown how strong Ronon and Radek are together so I have no doubts that they will bring the Wraith to their knees -- but, oh! To lose another home, when Ronon's already lost one and Radek's left at ( ... )

busaikko December 17 2007, 22:05:10 UTC

Look, I don't want you to think I'm a crazy stalker-girl, um. Just wanted to let you know I'm rereading for the fourth time. *waves*

the_cephalopod December 16 2007, 08:30:25 UTC

I've already told you that how perfect this - but that final flashback just made it even more so!! cep xxx

tielan December 16 2007, 10:21:07 UTC

Love this. Dramatic and dark and edgy and wonderful!

partners4life December 16 2007, 22:14:53 UTC

Love this. Dark, gritty and realistic. When the SGA Secret Santa challenge is over I hope you will post it on the zedexa list.

briar_pipe December 17 2007, 05:25:43 UTC

Oh, this is so sad and awesome! Ronon's protective instincts make me want to cry, and I love how Zelenka ends up holding his own. I always knew he was a subversive. "Mousetraps" my arse. ^_^