Comments | sga_lfws: RESULTS FOR LFWS #4 ROUND 5

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RESULTS FOR LFWS #4 ROUND 5

Jul 19, 2010 16:47

I'm SO sorry for this lapse in posting. How can I ever be forgiven? I hope you're all still around for this. But we are nearly finished and the show must go on.

All votes are counted and voting for the Last Fic Writer Standing 4 Round 5 is at last, finally, after weeks and weeks, closed. All authors are now revealed and the feedback to the ( Read more... )

lfws4: round 5, results

Comments 8

annieb1955 July 19 2010, 19:57:02 UTC

Congratulations to all. I'll get the banners done as soon as possible (hopefully today)

stella_pegasi July 19 2010, 20:46:47 UTC

Wow...first of all, erikah, you are forgiven; I forgot as well...RL has been a bitch lately.

Thanks to everyone, that was tough competition. I appreciate it.

Congrats to rangerbaldwin and drewandian, I loved your Cadman voice. She is a favorite character of mine.

I would like my crit, un-screened please.

Thanks again...

x_erikah_x July 19 2010, 20:50:24 UTC

excellent piece. the regret felt by Caldwell was well-written
shows the progression and development of his character very well; very in character and well-written
This was well-written. the character exploration fit well for what we already know from canon. Caldwell was also used nicely in this piece to highlight the special traits of other team members, too. The scenarios we well thought out.

stella_pegasi July 19 2010, 20:53:26 UTC

Thank you all very much for the kind words. I appreciate it.

drewandian July 20 2010, 00:15:33 UTC

i'd like my crit please, unscreened is fine

x_erikah_x July 20 2010, 13:25:10 UTC

I love the Cadman character, and it's nice to see this character as the focus of a story. I found her thoughts about members of the expedition to be very entertaining and insightful. However, the story seemed almost too casual to me; as if Cadman’s voice was not quite on target. She is sassy, but very bright. Also, the author needs to pay a bit more attention to grammar. All in all, however, this story was a fun read.
This was a good character study both for Cadman and the others she views. I liked the use of the other characters to chow personal growth for Cadman.

Banners annieb1955 July 27 2010, 20:04:38 UTC

Banners will be up later today. Sorry for the delay. I've had a rotten cold.

Re: Banners x_erikah_x July 27 2010, 20:28:25 UTC

*hugs* I hope you get better soon.