Action/Adventure, Week 2: What Comes Around - A Sateda Redux (2/2)

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Title: What Comes Around - A Sateda Redux
Author: ldyanne
Genre: Action/Adventure
Prompt: Déjà Vu
Word Count: 15,000
Rating: PG for language and violence
Warnings: None
Summary: They had rescued Ronon from Sateda, but the Wraith weren't going to let him go that easily.

Comments

[sholio]

That was fun. :) It's wonderful to see the team working together, each of them doing their part to get home. I love Ronon's woodcarving skills, and the festival of boats, and especially the team doing the ceremony together at the end.

[ldyanne]

Thank you, it was fun to write. I love getting backstory on characters, and I thought to try my hand at it with Ronon. There just isn't enough info on Ronon out there.

[sherry57]

Absolutely fantastic. The suspense when they were trying to escape the wraith,
the whump, all the team work - saving each other and taking care of each other - Sheppard being worried about his injury yet keeping it from the team, excitement, just everything you need for a great SGA1 story. I loved Sheppard's boredom and thinking he was sneaking out of the infirmary without Carson knowing. And the scene at the end was so nice. Great story to be saved and re-read often. Thanks.

[ldyanne]

Thank you so much! I loved writing this one, I'm so glad you liked it!

[kriadydragon]

Wonderful team adventure :D Loved how they each had their moment, and how concerned they were for each other. Loved the ritual at the end.

[ldyanne]

Thank you! I love team stories where everyone has to play their part, glad you liked it!

[valiree]

Very nice ! Love your Ronon : so much vulnérability in him, and so much strengh all roll in one person, He was so "uni" dimensionnal (hu, not sure it's a proper word) in the show.

[ldyanne]

Thank you! I thought the fifth season Ronon really began to become a person. I'm so glad you liked what I came up with here!

[titan5]

EXCELLENT!! Everyone was perfect - the worry, the snarking, their reactions to the situation. This was such a wonderful team episode. It was all of them working together that got them home. Poor John had the ultimate frustration for him - having to sit back (or lie back) and let his team do all the "heavy lifting". And I felt like we got to know Ronon a little better. Super loved the ending! Perfect ending for a wonderful story.

[ldyanne]

Thank you so much!! I really love team stories where everyone has a part to play. Glad you liked it!