Angst, Week 1: ElectroStar

[sga_genadmin]

Title: ElectroStar
Author: x_varda_x
Genre: Angst
Prompt Three strikes and you’re out
Word Count: 8100
Rating: 12A
Warnings: None
Summary: A space gate seemingly leading nowhere, strange readings hours out into deep space and a lightning struck Puddle Jumper? All in a day’s work for John and Rodney. Set late Season 2.

Comments

[hollow_echos]

This was a good story. I particularly enjoyed the Rodney whump and I really thought you did a good job of giving a sense of spatial awareness in the jumper when they were without gravity. It was a the little things - Rodney realizing he wasn't paralyzed, just floating, drops of blood hovering inside the jumper. Small tidbits like this gave a really good sense of what was going on at any given moment.

And of course the world never has enough Rodney whump, so that was an extra bonus :P

[x_varda_x]

Thank you for commenting! Rodney whump is so much fun :D

[sholio]

Ooh, creepy aliens! It's always the easy missions where things go wrong, isn't it?

[x_varda_x]

Thanks for commenting! No mission is ever easy for SGA :D

[anonymous]

A clever story! I really enjoyed the premise and the invaders being defeated by hunger was a stroke of genius, simple but made total sense.

[x_varda_x]

Thank you for commenting! \o/

[ed263]

Greatly enjoyed the story! Great concept of aliens taking over Atlantis! Also greatly enjoyed the Rodney whump! Well written and fun to read! Thanks for sharing it with us! ^_^

[x_varda_x]

Thanks! I must post this to FFN :D

[kristen999]

I really enjoy creative aliens and these were very creepy and I enjoyed the mystery from the first EPM contact all the way back to their near take over of Atlantis

[x_varda_x]

Thanks! I love scary/ambiguous really alien aliens :D