Humor, Week 1: The Laundry Ultimatum

May 07, 2009 08:11

Title: The Laundry Ultimatum
Author: explodedpen
Genre: Humour
Prompt Laundry Day
Word Count: 6630
Rating: PG13
Warnings: Mild but reasonably frequent swearing
Summary: A week in the life of the bravest man to ever walk the hallways of Atlantis... the laundry guy.
Notes: Huge thank to my beta, tli.

The Laundry Ultimatum )

genre:humor

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julii_wolfe May 7 2009, 15:31:19 UTC
awesome. I love the fact that the shrink, as usual, really doesn't understand the day to day difficulties facing EVERYONE working in the Pegasus Galaxy. *sniffs* If Col. Sheppard said it was an emergency, she would believe him, and we all know that he would be lying through his teeth.

Great team interactions here.

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explodedpen May 24 2009, 09:52:46 UTC
Hee hee, the shrinks in sci-fi never know what's going on! Thanks for the comment :D

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with_apostrophe May 7 2009, 18:16:42 UTC
Hamsters, goats, bugs... love it! Louis is a great character and a true hero!

A very inventive and funny story. Thank you so much for this.

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explodedpen May 24 2009, 09:53:15 UTC
And thank you for the comment! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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astridv May 7 2009, 20:21:28 UTC
Okay, I haven't had time to read this yet but my roommate just now saw the printout lying around and for the past couple minutes she's been continuously giggling in the background (and she barely ever reads fanfic...)

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explodedpen May 24 2009, 09:53:44 UTC
Hee! Brilliant :D Thanks

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roo1965 May 7 2009, 21:47:55 UTC
ROTFL, a nice OC piece, loved the weekly diary feel and all the weird Pegasus shit that he has to deal with- for a moment there, i thought the 4 hamsters that fled the purple clothes were SGA1 !!

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explodedpen May 24 2009, 09:54:46 UTC
lol, I think in my head the hamsters were maybe an alternate version of the team ;) They were certainly fun to write :D Thanks for the comment!

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kensieg May 8 2009, 01:22:06 UTC
This is a great story featuring the best OC since miss porcupine's crew!

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explodedpen May 24 2009, 09:55:08 UTC
Wow *blushes* Thank you!

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