Action/Adventure, Week 3: Ouroboros

[sholio]

Title: Ouroboros
Author: mahoni
Prompt: Endings and Beginnings
Word Count: 4600
Rating: PG-13
Warnings/Spoilers: Set before and during season 2’s “Runner”
Notes: huge thanks to ileliberte for the beta
Summary: Sometimes Ronon had more to worry about than just the Wraith.

Comments

[leesa_perrie]

Wow! This was a brilliant look at Ronon. Those worms were well creepy but also believable, and I love his reactions to Sheppard and co. Excellent.

[tipper_green]

I loved the world you created, the first one -- so neat and so *alien*. It's rare we get to see a real alien planet, and you painted this one very well. The fight with the Wraith on the same planet was also so well described! Very easy to see.

But I admit, what I liked best, was the POV. Ronon just leaps off the screen at you in this -- very real and strong and even, for a moment, weak. I really enjoyed this! Thank you for writing it!

Action/Adventure, Week 3: Ouroboros - story

[maxinemayer]

Very nicely done! Your story made me cry! I love it! Thank you for sharing.
Love, max

[wildcat88]

Neat story. I liked the world you invented (eww! worms!) Your Ronon POV is fantastic, and bringing Tyre in was a nice touch. I like where you left it too. Very well done.

[dragonladyk]

That was a lovely precursor to "Duet." Nice nod to bring in Tyre, and lovely complexity.

DragonLady