Action/Adventure, Week 2: City (2/2)

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Title: City (2/2)
Author: nottasha
Prompt: Artificial Intelligence
Word Count: 16,000
Rating: PG
Warnings/Spoilers: none
Summary: The team explores a city that was built to resemble Atlantis -- a City with a mind of its own.

Comments

[wildcat88]

I enjoyed this, especially the robot revolution. Your Ronon here is excellent. I love his thoughts about his Atlantis and how he switches from trying to kill a blarnaught barehanded (and make a coat!) to getting the C4. Nicely done.

[nottasha]

Hi wildcat! Thanks so much for your review. Yeah, I think Ronon has become rather attached to Atlantis. It's his home now. Thank you!

[kriadydragon]

Hee-hee! Too awesome. I loved the little robots. I want one.

[nottasha]

Yes, fun little robots! I think everyone should have one! Thanks so much for your review

[nottasha]

Hee, the robots will always be scutters in my mind. LOL. Thank you for your review

[quasar273]

This was lots of fun.

[nottasha]

Hi! Thank you for reviewing my story

[grey853]

OMG, this is soooo good. I love the idea of the robots revolution and that Ronon actually needs tending. Loved the part about when John and the City are talking about keeping Rodney busy. Very well done.

[nottasha]

Thank you for your comments on my story. Poor Rodney,it's bad enough when John is messing with him. Add a crazy City, and he's in trouble. Hee. Thank you for your review