Ache, by The Moonmoth [Slave Challenge]

May 26, 2005 01:21

Title: Ache
Author: The Moonmoth
Challenge: Slavery
Summary: "She should have stopped when she realized her need had gone beyond the purely physical."
Rating: PG-13
Category: Het
Pairings: Emmagan/Beckett, Emmagan/Ford, Emmagan/Sheppard, Emmagan/McKay
Beta: None, but if anyone wants to...?
Disclaimer: Not mine, just borrowing.

Ache )

challenge: slave, author: the_moonmoth

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canadian_snoopy May 26 2005, 00:39:02 UTC
Good grief, if there's a more fitting title, *I* certainly can't think of it.

And wow, that last line is like a kick in the teeth. Teyla's predicament is totally believable and understandable -- she really *is* in a state of limbo, isn't she?

*sighs* Awesome stuff, thanks for sharing... even if it makes me want to give Teyla chocolate and cookies, meany ;opppppp

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the_moonmoth May 26 2005, 01:36:19 UTC
she really *is* in a state of limbo, isn't she?

Yes! Good. That's the feeling I was going for. While she is a part of the Atlantis family, she remains somehow distant from it, removed, because she'll always be her people's leader first and foremost.

I'm glad you liked :)

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scrollgirl May 26 2005, 00:46:10 UTC
*hearts this fic like whoa* I love Teyla so much, and I love how you draw her, so wanting yet restrained. I love how she's pulled in so many directions -- not just the men she desires, but the people to whom she gives her loyalty as well. Wonderful!

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the_moonmoth May 26 2005, 01:38:07 UTC
*bg* Thank you

I love how she's pulled in so many directions

Yep. There's a lot of hats on that there head, and I'm sure if she knows if any of them fit. So to speak.

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anonymous May 26 2005, 01:24:40 UTC
I loved this. So layered and nuanced.

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the_moonmoth May 26 2005, 01:38:53 UTC
Thank you :)

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loveanddarkness May 26 2005, 01:37:06 UTC
Lovely story. This is very true to Teyla and what she would feel for these men, but most of all, for her people.

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the_moonmoth May 26 2005, 01:40:48 UTC
Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

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wickedwords May 26 2005, 02:08:36 UTC
A very cool look at Teyla and her relationships. Thanks.

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the_moonmoth May 26 2005, 11:33:35 UTC
Glad you liked :)

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