Learning to Walk, by scherryzade

Jun 18, 2009 17:11

Title: Learning to Walk
Rating: PG; gen
Character: Lorne
Disclaimer: Not mine (except the mistakes), no harm meant.
Summary: Evan had never actually learnt to draw. He had just known, learning to walk with a crayon clutched in his hand.

Learning to Walk )

challenge: a picture's worth 1000 words, author: scherryzade

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wpadmirer June 18 2009, 17:09:40 UTC

Very nice!

WP

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scherryzade June 18 2009, 23:22:41 UTC
Thanks!

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cslullaby June 18 2009, 17:10:41 UTC
This was perfectly awesome. :) I love the section with McKay's idea of "standing still" and Weir looking straight through him. I love Parrish setting the plant on fire and poor Thomson with the water bucket. The parts about the flipbook and the marines' explanations of why Lorne was in the infirmary made me laugh out loud. And Lorne's mother is just beautiful all the way through. I'm so glad you wrote this.

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scherryzade June 18 2009, 23:23:19 UTC
Thank you!

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scherryzade June 18 2009, 23:25:45 UTC
Thanks! (I could never think of a good way of expressing it explicitly :)

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skieswideopen June 18 2009, 17:17:54 UTC
Lovely! I really like Lorne's analysis of which types of media suit which people.

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scherryzade June 18 2009, 23:27:51 UTC
Thanks (Lorne does it because I can't use anything but ballpoint :)

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londonsabre June 18 2009, 17:39:25 UTC
This was beautiful. Thank you.

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scherryzade June 18 2009, 23:28:19 UTC
Thanks!

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