While Waiting on the Gate by Helen W. (Comfort Challenge)

[wneleh]

Title: While Waiting on the Gate
Author: Helen W. (wneleh)
Characters: Team (gen)
Rating: G
Spoilers: The Shrine (5x06)
Word count: ~1,500
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Summary: What happened while the team was, yk, waiting on that gate.

Comments

[erda_3]

I very much like the way you've given Teyla some logical character development.

[wneleh]

Thanks! I don't know whether it's my imagination or not, but she's seemed slightly more physical this season.

[incidental_fire]

Very sweet. I loved Teyla's inner monologue, and the image of Rodney curled up on her lap while they're sitting on the stargate.

[wneleh]

Thanks! That image has been stuck in my head for several days; I'm going to miss it, now that I've written it.

[wraithfodder]

Lovely little fic :)

[wneleh]

Thanks!

[kehleyr]

Well I enjoyed this! When I saw the episode I sort of felt that I wanted more of when they were stuck out there... so this was very nice to read :-D!

[wneleh]

Thanks!

I could happily write nothing but The Shrine comfort moments for the next six months. And they'd be canonically plausible! Thank you, show!

- Helen

[inocciduous]

N'aww! What a fantastic little episode-insert! I love the way you stretch Teyla's new mother role into everything else she does, too. And John recognized it too!! XD

Also: If you care In Rodney's current position, he would not be able to shallow anything. "shallow" should probably be "swallow." *g*

[wneleh]

Thanks, and thanks for the catch! I'd never have spotted that myself.

- Helen