Take Comfort in Your Friends, by facetofcathy, for the Comfort Challenge

Sep 05, 2008 12:10

Team fic with a savoury dash of McShep season salt ( Read more... )

author: facetofcathy, challenge: comfort

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jennytork September 5 2008, 17:02:06 UTC
I love it I love it I love it!

And he's BLIND to boot....made my day TWICE!!!

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facetofcathy September 6 2008, 12:47:26 UTC
He might be blind, and if you read it that way, that's good. He might be just really out of it too.

Thanks for reading.

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accidentalfan September 5 2008, 18:06:25 UTC
Oh wonderful. The joys of semi-delirious mental ramblings. I hope John gets to measure shoulders with Rodney soon.

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facetofcathy September 6 2008, 12:48:13 UTC
Yes there are lots of ways they could do that.

Thanks for reading.

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kristen999 September 5 2008, 19:37:59 UTC
Poor John, delirious and out of his mind and all those thoughts were voiced. Interesting and clever way of writing it, making the reader as sensory oppressed as Sheppard, but drawing on his team to get through. Loved John's thoughts about not sure if he was ready to fill the role of his 'big feet.”

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facetofcathy September 6 2008, 12:50:21 UTC
I love writing a John that has self doubts, because most people do. Lots of people see him as someone who doubts his value as a person, but I like making him just not get why people like the way he looks.

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linziday September 5 2008, 23:22:45 UTC
Awesome!

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facetofcathy September 6 2008, 12:50:31 UTC
Thanks!

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badwolf36 September 7 2008, 18:22:20 UTC
This was wonderfully written. Poor John. And go team!love! They are all adorable. Thanks for sharing!

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facetofcathy September 8 2008, 13:09:43 UTC
Thanks for reading!

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