Days of the Dead: The Second Day (Plantarum), by Sophonisba [first aid challenge]

[saphanibaal]

-title- Days of the Dead: The Second Day (Plantarum)
-author- Sophonisba (saphanibaal)
-ratings/warnings- Non-explicit het sex; reference to large difference in ages therein; some past Ronon/Melena. Spelling/orthographic variations denoting mishearings or misunderstandings. Part of my pet asymptotic-to-canon AU.
-timeframe- Shortly before "Aurora."
-spoilers

Comments

belated commentary response

[saphanibaal]

I'm glad my Ronon-voice worked for you; I'm still feeling my way into the character (which process, unsurprisingly, partly consists of coming up with a background for him: much of which was made up out of whole cloth, but the jerky-and-aftermath owes something to my own male relations ^_^ ).

//Making Rodney a distant relative of House cracked me up!//

I have, oh, five or six "these characters are linked in this way" crossover filing cards in my own deuterocanon, so it was fun to actually be able to show this one in text for a change. (And this one just fits.)

//And Ronon promising to help Miko kill her uncle's killer...//

Which is both a window into Ronon and a case of missed point like whoa... the justice Miko really wants at this point isn't vengeance but acknowledgment, for it to be known that yes, Kuroba Touichi WAS murdered and for people to agree that his family should have claimed as much in public rather than hid it like a dirty little secret. (You can probably tell that this is one of the two foundations of my personal Miko deuterocanon.)

//having Ronon and Charin together was brilliant, and Teyla's reaction was great.//

Thank you very much; that sort of appeared as I was putting the story together, and I fell in love with the idea but was a little worried about how it would be received. I'm glad it worked for you.

Thank you so much for your detailed comments!