Speech Deprived by X-parrot (First Aid challenge)

Jul 06, 2008 06:59

Title: Speech Deprived (~5,300 words)
Author: xparrot
Pairing: John/Rodney
Rating: PG (13 for a few words)
Notes: Last minute and ridiculously indulgent. Yes, I've batted three for three for CPR in my last three fics. Oops? Thanks to gnine for the title and the latest bad-thing-to-do-to-Rodney, and naye for the usual marvelous cheerleading (I am so spoiled!)
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challenge: first aid, author: xparrot

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sholio July 6 2008, 06:18:21 UTC
Awww, nicely understated h/c, and I love the team taking care of Rodney, and Rodney's refusal to see it for what it is.

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xparrot July 6 2008, 07:35:26 UTC
Obviously Team Taking Care is pretty much my biggest button - and I do love the way Rodney can so easily misinterpret even the people he loves. Also it was good to shut him up for a bit, to force John to speak up and explain...don't know how long it would've taken him otherwise!

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sholio July 6 2008, 07:39:52 UTC
Oh, one thing I also forgot to mention (I was going to edit the comment, but you beat me to it with your answer) is how much I loved the truncated Rodneyspeak in the messages he was writing on the tablet. It was just so adorably him.

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xparrot July 6 2008, 09:56:01 UTC
*laughs* I kind of love Rodney limited to typing, and John having to talk twice as much to fill the silence. Really the entire fic was going to be just the beginning and that last 'conversation', but it kind of got away from me...

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stitcher2ficcer July 8 2008, 15:28:33 UTC
?...but it kind of got away from me...

And this is something unusual? If I only had a dollar for every fic you've said this about....

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