Comments | sga_flashfic: Apples, Churches, and Very Small Rocks by ReySolo (burning up challenge)

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Apples, Churches, and Very Small Rocks by ReySolo (burning up challenge)

Apr 14, 2008 13:05

Title: Apples, Churches, and Very Small Rocks
Author: ReySolo aka ezazahaz
Pairing: McShep
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: ~1000
Summary: "I am not going to stand here listening to you recite Monty Python while we're about to be BURNED ALIVE."
Thanks as always to my beta epicycles!

( This is all your fault, you know... )

author: ezazahaz, challenge: burning up

Comments 19

scifinut April 14 2008, 17:31:00 UTC

This was hilarious and wonderful. Deathbed confessions...that lead to IN bed confessions. So much love right now.

ezazahaz April 15 2008, 15:50:10 UTC

Hee. Glad you enjoyed it! :)

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ezazahaz April 15 2008, 15:52:06 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad it came across the way I'd hoped...

ismenetruth April 14 2008, 18:14:18 UTC

Oh, man, John totally would think that "stroking some balls" is hilarious and dirty. Probably because it is. This was great - the dialogue was pretty much spot-on, the rescue was conveniently timed (just like on the show, haha) and you get bonus points for your fabulous icon. Firefly/Monty Python FTW!

ezazahaz April 15 2008, 15:53:48 UTC

Thanks so much! Yes, the rescue arrived just in the nick of time, making Teyla and Ronon big damn heroes, huh? :)

xparrot April 14 2008, 19:14:05 UTC

Hee - what perfect timing for a confession. Also, Sheppard is such a thirteen year old boy (fourteen? haw, he only wishes!)

ezazahaz April 15 2008, 15:57:42 UTC

He really, really is. :) Glad you liked it!

gaffsie April 14 2008, 19:16:43 UTC

This time, though, it was probably a good thing that none of the the slightly perturbed passersby investigated the screams. Heh.

Cute fic. :D

ezazahaz April 15 2008, 15:59:00 UTC

Glad you liked it. :) And credit for changing the last line goes to my beta, epicycles...