Sequelae, by The Spike 2/3

[spike21]

Comments

[renisanz]

This story is really good and so engaging. I'm enjoying it thoroughly, and I loved how you gradually what it was that drove the wedge between Rodney and John. The timing for that was perfect, because right when I began to wonder if I had missed something, you addressed that point in the story. Cool beans. :)

[spike21]

Thank you! I love it when a plan comes together. *g*