I Have Been Here Before by kodiak bear

Feb 28, 2008 13:38

Title: I Have Been Here Before ( Read more... )

challenge: second verse, author: kodiak_bear

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I Have Been Here Before - story maxinemayer February 28 2008, 18:57:20 UTC
Beautiful and powerful and thoughtful! I love this! Thank you for sharing.
Love, max

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Re: I Have Been Here Before - story kodiak_bear February 28 2008, 19:04:14 UTC
Thank you! I really love the challenge, there's just so much to do, but every attempt died an ugly and painful death before it even got started lol, so then this idea popped to mind and it's a far shorter concept to do and at the same time, I liked it far more than anything else I had tried.

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kodiak_bear February 28 2008, 23:31:39 UTC
Thanks so much! I think this is the one idea that struck me the most in the challenge. Atlantis has seen the same future play out once before, with the Ancients, and what must it be like to see the same battle again and fear the outcome, if it were capable of feeling or thinking.

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mangst February 29 2008, 01:10:37 UTC
This is wonderful. I felt sympathy for a city. Well done. :)

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kodiak_bear March 4 2008, 14:22:32 UTC
Thank you, heh, sympathy for a city, it's a funny thing. :) Atlantis just strikes me as lonely with issues lol.

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springwoof February 29 2008, 02:27:45 UTC
yay! Sentient!Atlantis, explained in a really cool, subtle way.

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kodiak_bear March 4 2008, 14:23:06 UTC
Thank you! I do like to think of the city as sentient, no matter how much canon never goes there. :)

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linzi5 February 29 2008, 13:30:14 UTC
Beautiful! :)

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kodiak_bear March 4 2008, 14:23:21 UTC
*waves* Thank you Linzi, you're a doll!

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