Skin Deep by Lady Anne

[ldyanne]

Title:  Skin Deep
Author: Lady Anne
Rating: R, PreSlash (John/Rodney)
Words: 7,800
Summary:  When John doesn't seem to be quite himself, it's up to Rodney to figure out what's wrong.

There wasn’t a sound in the control room as Dr. Rodney McKay stood with his 9 mil leveled on Lieutenant Colonel John Sheppard. Rodney stood with his back to the gate, which

Comments

[anonymous]

The plural of marine is marines, not marine's. Perhaps you want to fix that grammatical error, since it's in your summary.

[ldyanne]

It's fixed. Thanks.

[ratcreature]

FWIW, I looked at the formatting of your entry, and I think the reason for your story needing so many posts despite not being all that long is that there's a ton bloat code, probably from MS word, in your entry, so the character count is way higher than it would be for the plain words. If you took the bloat out and formatted it regularly it would likely fit in one post.

[ldyanne]

You are absolutely right! Thanks, I've fixed it now ;-)

[lantean_drift]

I really enjoyed this story.
I loved that Rodney figured it out and stuck to his guns - as it were.
Thanks for sharing it with us.
.xx.

[ldyanne]

Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. Rodney can be pretty determined when he wants to!

[mckayfan]

good fic i like how Rodney is the only one who knew.

[ldyanne]

Rodney is pretty observant ;-) I'm glad you liked the story!

[ldyanne]

Oh, thanks!! I couldn't just leave the clone there dead, especially after he saved Rodney. It would be weird to be Sheppard and know you're clone was there in the city somewhere!

Love your icon!