Comforts of Home, by the Azure Cascade (Return challenge)

[bluefall]

Title: The Comforts of Home

Author: The Azure Cascade

Spoilers: "Return" the first.

Rating: PG-13 for cussing. :)
Summary: For the Return challenge. Ronon's take on the city.

The Comforts of Home

Ronon liked the city of the Ancestors.

It was big, for a start. On bad mornings, when his legs started to itch and the walls felt a little too tight and too

Comments

[reginabellatrix]

Oh, very nice. Possibly I'm just sheltered, but I think this is the first Ronon POV Return story I've read. The way he goes through all of the things he likes about Atlantis, comparing and contrasting with Sateda, and showing how it had really become a home for him makes the end, when you realise that he's been cast out again, so poignant.

Thanks for sharing.

[maverick4oz]

Wow. This is just a beautiful portrait of Ronon. Vivid and bittersweet. I'm so, so glad he got his family back. Thank you for this.

[ratcreature]

Cool view of Ronon and how he compares Atlantis to Sateda.

[leesa_perrie]

Lovely, lovely story. So poignant and well written. Poor Ronon.

[leesa_perrie]

Ronon needs a hug...is that why he tends to give hugs out?

Glad you like the 'McKay in the bush' icon! That's one of my favourite McKay photos - he looks good all dirtied up and in the wild, doesn't he?!!

[ceitie]

I like this Ronon POV, especially his thoughts on showers and places to watch your hands before eating, because after seven years, having hot showers again would be the best thing ever.