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Homesick by Mad Maudlin

Feb 22, 2007 19:00

Title: Homesick
Author: Mad Maudlin
Rating: PG at the worst
Characters: Ronon
Warnings: Spoilers through 3x04 "Sateda"
Length: 700
Summary: Some thing you can't outrun.

Notes: My first SGA fic for mass consumption. Um. ::hides::

( Ronon didn't really think while he was running. )

author: mad_maudlin, challenge: sickness

Comments 18

quasar273 February 23 2007, 01:45:01 UTC

Oh, very nice. I love the strong sensory imagery, and how you convey that Sateda was so much bigger than just the ruined city that we saw in canon.

mad_maudlin February 24 2007, 22:58:22 UTC

Thanks! I've always wanted to see what went beyond the city and the little flashes of warrior-culture we get from Ronon in canon.

siegeofangels February 23 2007, 01:45:53 UTC

Oh, that's beautiful. Very very nice Ronon-thoughts, because being that quiet all the time doesn't mean nothing's going on. And really lovely language.

(Also, I love Ronon-with-dress-sword.)

mad_maudlin February 24 2007, 23:01:39 UTC

Thank you! I totally agree about Ronon--he can't always be King Badass of Pegasus, can he?

spike21 February 23 2007, 02:23:52 UTC

so lovely and sad. Very haunting. Good job.

almightychrissy February 23 2007, 03:24:34 UTC

I saw your username next to this post and my heart like, skipped a beat. You wrote my favorite HP fic of all time, so an SGA fic written by you is very exciting for me. And this fic was wonderful and heartbreaking and this perfect description of Ronon's sort of separation from the rest of them. Love.

mad_maudlin February 24 2007, 23:04:00 UTC

Thank you! I'm flattered. :-)

liviapenn February 23 2007, 04:49:28 UTC

Beckett asks him to come to the infirmary for one last check of his back, but Melena is waiting for him there

This was gorgeous, very poetic and sad, but not too over-the-top, and just so full of great details. Thanks for sharing! :)